Comments on: “clear!!” http://whypaisley.com/2008/09/20/clear/ Thu, 08 Jan 2009 14:20:39 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: Bobbi http://whypaisley.com/2008/09/20/clear/comment-page-1/#comment-8346 Bobbi Tue, 23 Sep 2008 21:47:31 +0000 http://whypaisley.com/?p=1742#comment-8346 I'll never look at a 9-volt battery the same way again. And gold shag carpet - hell this was my parent's house in the 70s! Great piece of fiction! I’ll never look at a 9-volt battery the same way again. And gold shag carpet - hell this was my parent’s house in the 70s! Great piece of fiction!

]]> By: dumakey http://whypaisley.com/2008/09/20/clear/comment-page-1/#comment-8339 dumakey Tue, 23 Sep 2008 12:05:14 +0000 http://whypaisley.com/?p=1742#comment-8339 Great piece, I enjoyed very much reading this. Great piece, I enjoyed very much reading this.

]]> By: Bobby Revell http://whypaisley.com/2008/09/20/clear/comment-page-1/#comment-8325 Bobby Revell Mon, 22 Sep 2008 11:12:53 +0000 http://whypaisley.com/?p=1742#comment-8325 I will never use a 9 volt battery again! Green enameled appliances, linoleum and shag - sounds just like my grandma's house. Great story Jodi :smile: I will never use a 9 volt battery again! Green enameled appliances, linoleum and shag - sounds just like my grandma’s house. Great story Jodi :smile:

]]> By: rel http://whypaisley.com/2008/09/20/clear/comment-page-1/#comment-8323 rel Mon, 22 Sep 2008 08:44:19 +0000 http://whypaisley.com/?p=1742#comment-8323 paisley, Captivating. It's the secret to keeping your reader turning the page. rel paisley,
Captivating. It’s the secret to keeping your reader turning the page.
rel

]]> By: Manictastic http://whypaisley.com/2008/09/20/clear/comment-page-1/#comment-8322 Manictastic Mon, 22 Sep 2008 07:47:08 +0000 http://whypaisley.com/?p=1742#comment-8322 You had me from beginning to the end. Lovely images, unusual twist and quite a happy and clever ending. You still got it ;) You had me from beginning to the end. Lovely images, unusual twist and quite a happy and clever ending. You still got it ;)

]]> By: DBA Lehane http://whypaisley.com/2008/09/20/clear/comment-page-1/#comment-8321 DBA Lehane Mon, 22 Sep 2008 07:05:08 +0000 http://whypaisley.com/?p=1742#comment-8321 Sad...touching...beautiful...sexy...it gripped me from start to end. Your eye for descriptive details is second to none. I spotted a typo on the line "the the lead EMT" but that's only a minor quibble. Sad…touching…beautiful…sexy…it gripped me from start to end. Your eye for descriptive details is second to none. I spotted a typo on the line “the the lead EMT” but that’s only a minor quibble.

]]> By: lissa http://whypaisley.com/2008/09/20/clear/comment-page-1/#comment-8320 lissa Sun, 21 Sep 2008 23:57:41 +0000 http://whypaisley.com/?p=1742#comment-8320 that was surprising that James died but somehow went back to 1973, it reminds me of that movie/book, "somewhere in time," by Matheson, where the guy went back in time in his mind but his body was still in the present, I do like the shift in different time but had to read it a few times to really get sorry, I haven't been commenting lately, been so out of it this whole month that was surprising that James died but somehow went back to 1973, it reminds me of that movie/book, “somewhere in time,” by Matheson, where the guy went back in time in his mind but his body was still in the present, I do like the shift in different time but had to read it a few times to really get

sorry, I haven’t been commenting lately, been so out of it this whole month

]]> By: meleah rebeccah http://whypaisley.com/2008/09/20/clear/comment-page-1/#comment-8317 meleah rebeccah Sun, 21 Sep 2008 18:40:02 +0000 http://whypaisley.com/?p=1742#comment-8317 *awesome* BTW I cant get this image out of my head..."harvest gold shag carpet". *awesome* BTW I cant get this image out of my head…”harvest gold shag carpet”.

]]> By: cordieb http://whypaisley.com/2008/09/20/clear/comment-page-1/#comment-8316 cordieb Sun, 21 Sep 2008 15:10:46 +0000 http://whypaisley.com/?p=1742#comment-8316 Very intriguing! Love the way you blend the scenes. Can't wait to read more! PLL, CordieB. Very intriguing! Love the way you blend the scenes. Can’t wait to read more! PLL, CordieB.

]]> By: Sweet Repose http://whypaisley.com/2008/09/20/clear/comment-page-1/#comment-8315 Sweet Repose Sun, 21 Sep 2008 14:08:06 +0000 http://whypaisley.com/?p=1742#comment-8315 I was clinging to every word, not wanting to miss a single episode...if there would have been another page, I would have quickly turned. Brilliant girl, you had a captive audience here ,as I felt all the anxt in the scenario. From memory, the alarm was getting on my last nerve too, good work! sharon I was clinging to every word, not wanting to miss a single episode…if there would have been another page, I would have quickly turned. Brilliant girl, you had a captive audience here ,as I felt all the anxt in the scenario. From memory, the alarm was getting on my last nerve too, good work!

sharon

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