Comments on: a cigarette burn

By: Jo Andrew

Jo Andrew — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 14:29:32 +0000

Your style in poem writing is very inspiring. I’m a beginner at this and I’ve never tried this approach before… thanks!

By: Nicole Nicholson

Nicole Nicholson — Sat, 14 Jun 2008 14:40:40 +0000

You use of the metaphor of a cigarette burn is intriguing. I like it.

-Nicole

By: Nathan

Nathan — Sat, 14 Jun 2008 10:34:41 +0000

It’s more like the impression of an emotional state — of being swept up by something, preoccupied “passion or art”–great tone.

By: shakir hasnain

shakir hasnain — Sat, 14 Jun 2008 05:24:54 +0000

truly beautiful. the idea, the expression that became it and the music that found a home in it.

fascinating piece. thank you for sharing this one.

By: Sara

Sara — Sat, 14 Jun 2008 01:32:30 +0000

I have mentioned this poem at PWB. Thanks for being on our blogroll.

By: Sara

Sara — Fri, 13 Jun 2008 22:51:43 +0000

I love this one! Love the repetition and the sultry tone of it.

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Thu, 12 Jun 2008 17:43:58 +0000

Woohoo! Great job! Glad I caught this one…I, too, like your new photo! It goes so well with your profile words.
As of now, I plan to see the hospital in a rear view mirror tomorrow. I’ll be playing catchup for a while -

By: meleah rebeccah

meleah rebeccah — Sat, 07 Jun 2008 15:52:10 +0000

I am always amazed with what you can do with one photo. Your words are mesmerizing.

By: Dan

Dan — Sat, 07 Jun 2008 11:18:07 +0000

Great example of how your talent allows you to take something unsure, then with repetition and deep thought turn it into something special!

By: Gemma

Gemma — Sat, 07 Jun 2008 10:26:58 +0000

Love the tension between the jaunty rhythm and the serious musings. Great!

Gemma